Travel Review: Halifax
I've written up another travel article, this one on Halifax. You can find it here.
I'm going to keep it on my "articles" blog for a few days before I submit it to TravelMag.co.uk. If anyone notices any typos or other mistakes, I'd appreciate it if you could drop me a comment.
I also appreciate further advice in countering colds. It's almost gone, but it's still hanging on with it's damned fingernails.
posted by Ryan @ 1:38 p.m.
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But, if said tourist is at all savvy, they will also want to do dinner in Halifax.
Sure, but how about they will also want to dine in Halifax........do dinner sounds very businessy.
Good call. The one thing is that "dine" doesn't really imply any sort of time, and I want to imply that it's for the evening meal.
How about:
"But, if said tourist is at all savvy, they will also want to have dinner in Halifax."
Does that work?
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